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PancakeSushi's avatar

Beautiful Sara!

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You're welcome 😊

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

Sara love it! Fierce and evolving!

Sara da Encarnação's avatar

Thank you Dorie:) I'm glad it landed.

Sara da Encarnação's avatar

BearSage met the poem amazingly, thank you, and thank you all for opening this door :))) The Poetry Posse is an amazing group of excellent poets.

Bear Sage's avatar

I love the flow in this Sara🫶

Sara da Encarnação's avatar

The group is inspiring:) loved your comments. Always 100!

Meditations On Permafrost's avatar

Thanks for sharing this. It’s a great piece.

Sara da Encarnação's avatar

Thank you for reading:)

Robert's avatar

Sara enters the fields of "being-in-the-seasons of mother earth as a remembrance, recalibrate and made a new. An in and out of the seasons as a woman evoking

existence:

"She is the land waters,

That ocean of self, bathing

living creatures, that

spring from, in the late night, phases of the moon.

She commands with an execution of winter break; concerns the seed though empty space in charge.

According to the Word wthin, her universal womb is a refuge for a thousand of hibernating, returning incarnations.

Blooming worlds, her eyes of green pasture bring me to a bow.

Sara da Encarnação's avatar

Thank you:))) you know well.

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

What moves me here is the absence of force.

Nothing is trying to become. Nothing is trying to convince.

And precisely because of that, everything opens.

“The waiting is the making” stayed with me for a long time after reading.

As if what returns each year does not arrive from outside us, but passes again through a door that was always there, quietly waiting to be remembered.

And perhaps that is why the final image feels so true:

we are not the bloom,

we are the threshold through which it enters.

Sara da Encarnação's avatar

I operate from thresholds so it's accurate:) thank you, Antonio.

Christopher Van Name's avatar

Never knew. Beautiful, Sara.

Sara da Encarnação's avatar

Thank you Christopher:)