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Oh my God. This was so gripping. And such a metaphor for our current “culture.” Almost everyone on screens instead of in scenes, handing our power over to AI and bots instead of powerfully holding one another’s hands. The ferocity and rightness, righteous of rebellion. The child abandoned at the breakfast table, the shells of her mind-numbed parents. Sigh.

So my takeaway? I commit to being FULLY PRESENT when I am blessed to have company, companionship for a meal more often rather than watching a show together while we eat.

Another positive move to liberate myself, reclaim my sovereignty, and LIVE my actual life just happened this weekend: I deleted Facebook from my phone.

Theoretically, I can still log onto it from my laptop or desktop, but I haven’t. Two days Facebook free, which sounds like nothing, but considering the fact that I’ve addictively been on it every day for probably a dozen years—only exceptions being when I was in places without Wifi, such as camping trips or boats—for me this is a big step.

And I noticed I had more time for poetry and sitting outside, enjoying the sunshine and the birds. I’m kind of a math geek, allow me to do the math. If I was spending, let’s say an average of two hours a week on Facebook, in a year = 104 hours. Accounting for 1/3 of each day asleep, so we’ll call an “awake day” unit = 16 hours, this equates to an ENTIRE WEEK every year scrolling The FB Voice! 😱

No more! I’m taking out my pods, leaving the Pod.

It’s not too late.

Thank you!

P.S. This poem-story reminds me a bit of The Lottery. Ever read that back in school?

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The leaf in the open hand stays exact, first in rainwater then frozen into ice. The body remains while the feet learn to detour and the Voice keeps its rhythm. The good shoes and curled fingers are the only things that don’t adjust.

Maddie stopping and taking the AirPods out is the only real break in the pattern. She lets the unfiltered street noise back in the bus, the leaf blower, the siren and then speaks in her own time. For a moment the faces open. That’s all it takes. The Voice renames her the threat, the hands do what ordinary hands do when the feed gives them a target, and the phones record the management of the interruption rather than the body on the ground.

I’ve seen versions of this in different rooms and different uniforms. The cost is rarely dramatic at first. It’s the replacement of your own rhythm with the one running in everyone else’s ears, until stepping around what’s in front of you feels like the loyal thing. The girl at the table watching the mouth shapes shows how the pattern moves forward without needing to be explained.

A year later the line is straight and the ground is just ground. The crack in the pavement is still there, but only if you know to look for the place where someone once stood still long enough to name what the rest had agreed not to see.

The piece shows the machinery without offering comfort. The Voice doesn’t need to be believed forever. It only needs to stay in the ears long enough that the feet no longer notice the gutter.

Thank you for the wisdom and lesson.

Gratitude ✨🙏🏻✨

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