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PancakeSushi's avatar

Beautiful work by Franky and Nina, aching with remembrance, before shedding the past. There's a centering in the present, though it is a moment that stretches forever; an eternal now filled with expunging. This is a deep piece, bravo

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I appreciate the vulnerability of this poem. It's about change and transformation but it's not shown as a huge celebration for everyone to see.

Lines like "I’m practicing not dragging my ghosts into rooms they were never meant to enter." and "Even my fear is offered water / before I ask it to leave." show tenderness and humility.

This changes is an ongoing process, not the destination.

Beautiful work.

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