What a truly powerful and inspiring poem! It deeply resonates with the profound truth that sometimes, by courageously refusing to "fall" into predetermined paths, we discover our truest light and capacity to illuminate worlds that were once unseen. It beautifully celebrates the spirit of self-determination and the incredible potential to forge an entirely new, radiant destiny. Thank you for sharing such an illuminating piece Kim!
I loved the moment when the Sun laughed instead of judging. That completely changed the direction of the poem and made the ending feel full of possibility.
Love these lines 🖤I used to live here>>>
Past the edge.
Into the blackest black
Hi there!
Totally love this. Such amazing talent
Lawrence, you’re kind and thank you
You're welcome
Oh, I love this so much Kim! What an inspiring allegory!🌟
Ah. Thank you.
Wonderfully written and powerful words within that piece, Kim.
Thanks, Gary
What a truly powerful and inspiring poem! It deeply resonates with the profound truth that sometimes, by courageously refusing to "fall" into predetermined paths, we discover our truest light and capacity to illuminate worlds that were once unseen. It beautifully celebrates the spirit of self-determination and the incredible potential to forge an entirely new, radiant destiny. Thank you for sharing such an illuminating piece Kim!
Thank you for your thoughtful and kind words
Of course, thank you for yours Kim.
That is one incredible piece of writing. Well done Kim.
Thank you, Mark.
I love every line of this.
Love ❤️
I loved the moment when the Sun laughed instead of judging. That completely changed the direction of the poem and made the ending feel full of possibility.
Me too